Good start Mark! You have a couple synth lines all competing for the top spot in each of your Sections, A B and C. I would try to pick your FAVORITE synth part in each section and try to make that the focus. For example, I really like the end half of your A section best. I'd keep that part and cut the rest! Also, don't use that same synth line in the beginning of the B section, cut it and your B section just might work without changing anything else. I really like your C section, but I would cut off the tail end of it, it's unnecessary. Good luck!