ongfkey i see what you're saying
Yes, little hollow said what I was trying to say in English :3
usually out of key things sound out of place. that's why you gotta listen really hard to make something perfect
Here is an sng I made to show you what I mean, this song is in f minor natural, and two of the notes you used in the bassline didn't fit in. Sometimes that can be done intentionally for flavor but sometimes it's not and it's usually easy to see when it's accidentally done because it doesn't add to the song, instead making a confusing addition to the song https://www.dropbox.com/s/eu13t3a3ymkmlad/Untitled%20Song%20%283%29.sng?dl=0
It was offkey because the notes of the bassline didn't sound right with the other notes, mostly because some of the notes were sharp, most of them were fine, but some were off. Just listen to the beginning two basslines in my version and compare them to the proceeding two and you might understand what I mean.