That arp is really spastic and the note choices are weird. The kick has no low end and too much high end, same with the snare. White noise sweep needed to go into the big growl before the buildup and needed before the drop. The hats are really stale, instead of looping them like that add another two bars you can loop onto it. Pan them to the left, and cut the release back on them cause they are really long sounds. Not a bad start. Spend a bunch of time on your sound design, get something that sounds good!!
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Foresight
Oh dang, alright haha.
ER_0R (And-Die)
Well it'll be about six months when I get a new computer so it works out for now.
Foresight
That's six months away though....
ER_0R (And-Die)
Yeah, I'm taking Music Theory in my second semester for Junior year high school.
Foresight
You also need to learn music theory mate. Your stuff is still not always in key.
ER_0R (And-Die)
Thanks Ryan! :D I guess this criticism is really gonna pay off :P
ER_0R (And-Die)
ok thanks Dan :D
Foresight
That arp is really spastic and the note choices are weird. The kick has no low end and too much high end, same with the snare. White noise sweep needed to go into the big growl before the buildup and needed before the drop. The hats are really stale, instead of looping them like that add another two bars you can loop onto it. Pan them to the left, and cut the release back on them cause they are really long sounds. Not a bad start. Spend a bunch of time on your sound design, get something that sounds good!!
ER_0R (And-Die)
Aaaaaaaaaaaand the phaser wub needs to be turned down in volume a bit xD