Not putting this on, sorry.
That was fast. Nice job raising the kick and snare volume, but now they are too loud in the intro and buildup xD You just needed a little volume boost. I still think more synths and a main melody could have filled it up a lot more and made it sound better. You also really need that sub in the drop, it's way too empty. This is better though. Make sure you have that sub next time and really, really fill it up with synths! It'll make your song a lot better. Keep it tup though :)
Thanks very much AEverson!! :D
Yes, now here is something worth while. Loved the part from 1:23.