You should let the beginning play for about 4-8 measures before introducing a new clip. The beginning clip does not sound like it is a part of the same song as your melody that comes in later. Instead of feeling like a continuous song, this feels like several songs pieced together.
I like how the beginning starts off being really quiet and then getting louder. But I think you need to work on matching the beats because some of them are completely different from the others.
I really liked the last part of the song and some beats but some connections of the beats didn't sound that good so I think you need to work on that connections more.
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Smerkalot
You should let the beginning play for about 4-8 measures before introducing a new clip. The beginning clip does not sound like it is a part of the same song as your melody that comes in later. Instead of feeling like a continuous song, this feels like several songs pieced together.
HiMyNameIsShrek
I like how the beginning starts off being really quiet and then getting louder. But I think you need to work on matching the beats because some of them are completely different from the others.
hoahwoah
I really liked the last part of the song and some beats but some connections of the beats didn't sound that good so I think you need to work on that connections more.