Heywhatchadoing? thanks for the feedback.I know it is repetitive....kind of like life LOL. I will be looking to you and other more experienced people to help me reach my full potential. On the positive side....somebody could be spinning some awesome poi to this mix. Thanks for your input.
The beginning is a bit repetitive, a bit more could've gone on there, maybe a build-up. The rest is very good, the melodies melded well together and the arrangement was good. Make sure over time, you start using less loops, it will make your songs more original and will get you into some good groups. :)