Good combination of melody and rhythm in the beginning, choice of rhythm in the following section is good in making the transition from the melody and rhythm in the beginning smooth.
1:01 transition to a new melody and rhythm is a bit awkward as the choice of rhythm is different from the previous section (the previous being very upbeat and intense, while the new section had long sustain sounds and slower rhythm)
Suggestion: Listen to the transitions between all the different sections in the song (i.e. each time there is a new sound introduced), check that the tempo (speed) is consistent.
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tanwensiu
Good combination of melody and rhythm in the beginning, choice of rhythm in the following section is good in making the transition from the melody and rhythm in the beginning smooth. 1:01 transition to a new melody and rhythm is a bit awkward as the choice of rhythm is different from the previous section (the previous being very upbeat and intense, while the new section had long sustain sounds and slower rhythm) Suggestion: Listen to the transitions between all the different sections in the song (i.e. each time there is a new sound introduced), check that the tempo (speed) is consistent.