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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Great start, Imani! I like your sections, but a few things: first, your A section needs to show up between the B and C sections, and then again at the end of the song (ABACA). Your ending A section now is not as built up as your opening section: I'd change it to match your first part. Next, your B and C sections are a little too long, and don't have a melody line (something you can sing). Try adding a different synth line to each of those sections. This will be amazing with the tweaks I mentioned, good luck!

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