for instance, in basketball people were like, you're awful at shooting threes! i took it as motivation. 2 months later, I'm the best three point shooter on the team. so yeah
i like to take it as motivation and advice,
ok GT Beatz, just wanna say, CROSSbones and many others gave you criticism and you took it really well!
ok thx for the feedback! appreciate it much!
"All the other rappers, all they care about is clappers" - What do you mean by clappers? That they only care about people praising them? cuz that would work. The thing about stop lights and comittee/gritty just sounds like words you just put together because they rhymed, I can't make any sense out of em. There were a few other lines that from what I was able to hear didn't make much sense, but that was cuz the rest of the bar was mumbled (blame the recording lol). Don't take this too harshly, I listen to only fancy lyrical rap and analyze everything. Your song was pretty good, dont worry :)
Cheesy af voice is poorly produced (though thats fine, computer recording generally sucks), and there's a few lines that don't make any sense. But otherwise, you stay on point with what you mean throughout, and you have a couple nice rhymes.
I can't decide wut i like doing better rapping or instrumental. Do u guys like my instrumental songs or my raps better?