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JJ on the beatz
about 4 years ago

I like it. Has a nice beat and tune to it.

Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Hey! Few things: It sounds like you have a short A section, a B section, goes back to A, and then a LOOOOONG C section that changes several times, then back to a short A section. I would cut your C section significantly, using only the part of it you like best. Also, I really like the drums you put in in the last A section, but with they were in the rest of the A sections! Add them, they sound great together! Good start, see if you can edit this into a super project.