Thanks for the feedback Croissant!! I really needed to know where i was weak! gotta do better>>
Add a chord progression, having only a melody leaves everything else super weak and just makes it incomplete no matter what you do. Bass, chords, arpeggios, something to establish the basis. On the other hand, congratulations on not using loops, something you don't see very often.
Thanks man!! sure ill check on adding new clips>
the track itself is good just that it gets kinda annoying listening to the same beat for a little while.