This is a great start! I like the rhythm stuff at the beginning of the A section, I wish it went on longer and you cut some of the second half of it, ya know? Both your B and C sections work, but they each sound like there may be one or two too many sounds jammed in that section. try editing your sounds a bit and see what you come up with. Keep working and give it a try:)
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Lantz Beatz
This is a great start! I like the rhythm stuff at the beginning of the A section, I wish it went on longer and you cut some of the second half of it, ya know? Both your B and C sections work, but they each sound like there may be one or two too many sounds jammed in that section. try editing your sounds a bit and see what you come up with. Keep working and give it a try:)