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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Great start! Try adding a melody line (synth part or instrument part, something you sing) to your A sections, and maybe a touch more rhythm part or beats to your C section. I love your B section the most! It's kinda creepy and off putting, but I think that's why I like it. Try my advice, see what you think. Good luck!

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