i'd say work on is the track structure, listen to some real tracks in whatever genre you're making, and see where certain things are like an intro, breakdown, buildup, drop etc.

Thanks a lot cal! that means a lot coming from you!! but yeah i have a basic account so i pretty much just write some of my own loops in the piano roll and work with prerecorded loops, for some reason the kick cut out in some sections not really sure why but it still sounds good either way. I'm working on a couple other songs at the moment I'll be sure and bug you about those when they are done haha take care man! and thank you for the feedback

this is really good man i like it, did you make all this with midi? I like the deep sounds that come in after the first bit, the kinda wobbles and growl are nice, well done