Im sorry you did not like it
The drums dont match the melody and the drums stand out too much. Also the song is a little bland and could really use some extra instruments.
I thought the same thing, about that part. Thank you for your input! much love! <3
First off you have improved soo much man! the first part of the track is nice but you lost my attention at 00:31 you lost the afftect you had on me when i first played it but, at the same time it isnt too bad, at 1:31 i think that you could have done a diffrent type of beat i personally dont think the beat you have for it suits the melody