Don't hold back on the rubric restrictions. You could make your song longer to include more themes. This would be good background music in your claymation video.
Very cool ideas included in this song. I appreciate the thoughtful combo of sound clips, but most of what you have is the same theme throughout. My mind/ears want to hear changes, variations, and growth in the song's soul. Try to include something w/in the song that changes it up. The song you have is more one theme, we will name theme A. Your song would be A-A-A-A. Add some more themes while keeping some rhythms here and there, try an ABACBA theme pattern or ABA at least. Listen to some of my tracks, Jamalama is ABACBA, the 1st minute and 1/2 is ABAC.
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Smerkalot
Don't hold back on the rubric restrictions. You could make your song longer to include more themes. This would be good background music in your claymation video.
Smerkalot
Very cool ideas included in this song. I appreciate the thoughtful combo of sound clips, but most of what you have is the same theme throughout. My mind/ears want to hear changes, variations, and growth in the song's soul. Try to include something w/in the song that changes it up. The song you have is more one theme, we will name theme A. Your song would be A-A-A-A. Add some more themes while keeping some rhythms here and there, try an ABACBA theme pattern or ABA at least. Listen to some of my tracks, Jamalama is ABACBA, the 1st minute and 1/2 is ABAC.