Great job Ashley! You followed the form perfectly. The only two things I might change would be: Add one more interesting part to your B section, and make sure your C section isn't "fighting" itself. In other words, make sure all the sounds in your C section go together (You might want to try cutting a sound you don't love and adding a different one, or just take a sound away and leave it gone....just in that C section!).
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Lantz Beatz
Great job Ashley! You followed the form perfectly. The only two things I might change would be: Add one more interesting part to your B section, and make sure your C section isn't "fighting" itself. In other words, make sure all the sounds in your C section go together (You might want to try cutting a sound you don't love and adding a different one, or just take a sound away and leave it gone....just in that C section!).