Great start, Alianna! Your rhythms in each section are great. They are unique and work well together. However, your A and C sections don't have a melody line (something you can sing). Try finding a synth part or an instrument part to put in each section. In your B section, add more of the saxophone part to make your melody longer. Nice work, see if you can make these changes. Good luck!
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Lantz Beatz
Great start, Alianna! Your rhythms in each section are great. They are unique and work well together. However, your A and C sections don't have a melody line (something you can sing). Try finding a synth part or an instrument part to put in each section. In your B section, add more of the saxophone part to make your melody longer. Nice work, see if you can make these changes. Good luck!