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Cecil G. Avatar
Cecil G.
over 2 years ago

yeh the whole song is trash i am completely reworking it

theinstrumentalchabbs Avatar
theinstrumentalchabbs
over 2 years ago

imo the melody and bass is good, but i think it could use maybe like an extra melody over top of it (like another instrument doing a short motif?) or a B section melody (like how you have your main melody but you make another one to give the song some variety) drums are alright but i feel like they need more snare to make the sound less off otherwise, nice work!!

Cecil G. Avatar
Cecil G.
over 2 years ago

Yes, everything on the track is off tempo as of now

Eternis Avatar
Eternis
over 2 years ago

I do have to agree with @Red "beats. The snare seems to be a little off-tempo. The Melody and bass sound good, I did enjoy these parts. Keep it up, brother!

𝒱𝒾𝒸𝑒#𝒞𝑜𝓊𝓃𝓉 Avatar

What bpm is this? I can help you with the song, It's not on point though I can show you how to make this on point man, I'll give you a pm my man, But I like the beat it's got something to it, But we need you making real deal beats

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