imo the melody and bass is good, but i think it could use maybe like an extra melody over top of it (like another instrument doing a short motif?) or a B section melody (like how you have your main melody but you make another one to give the song some variety)
drums are alright but i feel like they need more snare to make the sound less off
otherwise, nice work!!
I do have to agree with @Red "beats. The snare seems to be a little off-tempo. The Melody and bass sound good, I did enjoy these parts. Keep it up, brother!
What bpm is this? I can help you with the song, It's not on point though I can show you how to make this on point man, I'll give you a pm my man, But I like the beat it's got something to it, But we need you making real deal beats
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Cecil G.3 years ago
yeh the whole song is trash i am completely reworking it
theinstrumentalchabbs3 years ago
imo the melody and bass is good, but i think it could use maybe like an extra melody over top of it (like another instrument doing a short motif?) or a B section melody (like how you have your main melody but you make another one to give the song some variety) drums are alright but i feel like they need more snare to make the sound less off otherwise, nice work!!
Cecil G.3 years ago
Yes, everything on the track is off tempo as of now
(}+=-ETERNIIS-=+{)3 years ago
I do have to agree with @Red "beats. The snare seems to be a little off-tempo. The Melody and bass sound good, I did enjoy these parts. Keep it up, brother!
π±πΎπΈπ#πππππ3 years ago
What bpm is this? I can help you with the song, It's not on point though I can show you how to make this on point man, I'll give you a pm my man, But I like the beat it's got something to it, But we need you making real deal beats