Pretty good for your first track! Just takes a long time to get mixing, mastering, and composition down. One thing with samples is you need to put in a lot of work to make them as original as possible. Try to cut them down into bits and digitally rebuild them, or add all kinds of fx to them to make them sound as original as possible. Not bad though!
sample mixing at its finest ;)
Alright :). I will work on that.
But how do I make my own sounds?