Good to hear a nice development from the earlier version, liked the rhythm in the background at 00:22 and fade out to a new section.
Mainly 3 new sections: 00:34 to 00:41, 00:42 to 00:58, 00:58 till the end. Would suggest switching 00:34 to 00:41 and 00:42 to 00:58 around, try it out and see if this would achieve a better transition in energy level from the previous section before 00:34. Work on the ending as well, the song is ending mid-melody currently.
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tanwensiu
Good to hear a nice development from the earlier version, liked the rhythm in the background at 00:22 and fade out to a new section. Mainly 3 new sections: 00:34 to 00:41, 00:42 to 00:58, 00:58 till the end. Would suggest switching 00:34 to 00:41 and 00:42 to 00:58 around, try it out and see if this would achieve a better transition in energy level from the previous section before 00:34. Work on the ending as well, the song is ending mid-melody currently.