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Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Love the A section! Your B section seems to have one synth line too many, they sound like they are fighting each other. Delete the one you like the least. Also, your C section uses the same synth line as your C section, pick a new one. The A and C melodies can't be the same. You'll be able to tweak this quickly, nice job!