Too high pitched, maybe try moving it down an octave. As for the piano, you should try to have different instruments in different octaves so that they can contrast each other. Longer notes go well with faster, shorter notes. Your drums are a little hectic and need some effects on them like reverb, possibly a compressor, a filter, etc.
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E A S T
but yes maybe some effects on the drums.
E A S T
well, i heard the first half a second of the song then followed. keep it up man!
Golden Vortex
thank you for the feedback, ill try harder next time
TENEBRIS
Same goes for the instruments
TENEBRIS
Too high pitched, maybe try moving it down an octave. As for the piano, you should try to have different instruments in different octaves so that they can contrast each other. Longer notes go well with faster, shorter notes. Your drums are a little hectic and need some effects on them like reverb, possibly a compressor, a filter, etc.