You're almost there! Beef it up with some home-made synth lines and drum riffs.
Judging for the Contest: The choir at the start of this track really gives a nice feel, but the moment you started putting the synths in, it just destroyed it for more. This is also way too repetitive and a little uninteresting. But the end of the track was blending together nicely. Take DJ XJM's advice, it sums up all I really wanted to say. :)
I give this a 2.5 out of 5.
Judge comment continued.... This is getting a 3 out of 5 from me.
Judging for Ministry of Soundation Contest: This was not really resonating very well with me until the end of the whole track. It felt as if all you did was slop loops and some samples together hoping they would sound good together. I won't say you did not put some time and effort into this, but I think this could have been better. It felt as if there was something missing throughout the whole track. My advice: try making whatever loops and samples you use work. Making music is like drawing. Place a series of lines and shapes around a piece of paper to make that house you wanted.
Just Perfect! Hi I'm new, but i need to stop here, and tell you : CONTINUE! with this beautifull ideas :D... Super Like!