Ultimatum

Well it's feedback. In my writing 1 class last semester, someone actually liked how I peer reviewed their paper because I'm apparently the only one that actually provides feedback in the class. Apparently everyone else would usually just say, "yea, their paper is good", whereas I, check grammar and formatting and such in accordance to rubric.

Plus there is more to respond to, because there is always the other option of the rather nefarious "k".

lol, but it is helpful :P

this dude writes essays saying this song was repetative

Oh yeah, definitely! That's an awesome idea! I might just edit the song file to do just that, but I'd have to do that tomorrow, so maybe not. Eh, we'll see xD

Interesting experimentation. I think that at some-point that you should have had it change into a different segment where you let the parts (like the arp) continue to move and flow without the interruption of the glide part, and then after that branch you can use a pickup or drum fill to return back into that part.

Thanks : )

Fantastic!

Y'know, good point. I was planning on it, but then I didn't feel like continuing it all that much :P

I wish you would have done more with the drums and sped up the melody in some parts just to make it more interesting. But it's still purty gewd as is

Heyyy, that's pretty good!