There was clipping from the kicker being far too loud in sections making it distorted and muddy. There was only one chord sequence used, which caused the song to be a bit repetitive. the rhythms and effects were good and the layering was great. I think a bit more work in the mixing stage is needed to get the levels right though. p.s. I love the suspension at the end of each chorus
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4EYED
thanks dusk its not quite done but i figured this contest would give it attention so that way people could tell me what to do:)
Audial
There was clipping from the kicker being far too loud in sections making it distorted and muddy. There was only one chord sequence used, which caused the song to be a bit repetitive. the rhythms and effects were good and the layering was great. I think a bit more work in the mixing stage is needed to get the levels right though. p.s. I love the suspension at the end of each chorus
Oozzie
this is pretty good too, this is shaping up to be one hell of a contest