Ms. Lantz
about 4 years ago

Good start! Your A section works well. I would add a beat or rhythm sound to your B section, and while the beginning of your C section works great, the second part of it sounds exactly like your B section. Make the first part of C your whole section but make it longer, and cut the second half of it. See me if you need help! Try these fixes and you'll be on your way to an A plus:)